Jumat, 04 Mei 2012

BIG MISTAKE

On sunny Sunday morning, Alawiyah, Dika, Sherly and Tesa have a plan to watch titanic 3D movie. Before they are going to cinema, Alawiyah and Sherly are going together. They have a plan to watch the same movie, but before they leave, Dika is sending a short message to Tesa using his handphone, Dika type “hey Tesa, today we gonna going to cinema, right?” and then Tesa replied “of course”. And then Dika said to Alaw and Sherly “you two can go first, I have to pick up Tesa at her house. We gonna catch you up later”
                
 A couple of hours…

Alaw and Sherly have been waiting Dika and Tesa at the cinema, Dika and Tesa have arrive at cinema after Alaw and Sherly wait for them about 1,5 hour.

Tesa       : “hey, did you two have been waiting for us for a     long time?”

Alaw       : “of course we are !! we have waiting you two for 1,5 hour,what make you two so late?”

Dika       : “we are so sorry to make you two waiting for us, itis cause of Tesa , she need a hour to take a bath”

Sherly     : “yaa yaaa it’s allright”

Dika       : “did you two have bought some ticket?”

Alaw       : “of course we are, but we just buy 2 tickets. We don’t bought the ticket for you two”

Dika       : “it’s okay, me and Tesa will buy the ticket by ourself”

A couple of minutes..

Tesa       : “now we have bought our tickets, the movie will start in 10 minute”

Sherly     : “let’s get into the theater, I don’t want to miss the movie even 1 minute. I really love this kind of movie !!”

Dika       : “yeah, let’s get in”
                
In the theater, all of the light is off so the place is so dark. They can’t see anything, they just can see the way that they walk, and their seat. After they get their seat, they sit In there and wait the movie start.
                
A few minute after the movie start, Tesa can’t concentrate to the movie cause of the noisy sound that come from beside. She yell at someone who sit beside her,.

Tesa       : “hey, can you lower your volume when talking? I 
can’t concentrate with the movie”

Tesa is yelling just like that cause she assume that someone who is beside her is Alaw or Sherly.
                
The film, is still going and then Tesa still hear the noisy voice from beside. At this time, the people who got annoyed not just Tesa but Dika felling annoye too.

Dika      : “Tesa have told you to lower your volume when talking !! why you    can’t be not noisy at this moment”

Dika is talking with anger and he trow a little bit of popcorn to someone who sit beside of Tesa.
                
After of that moment, Tesa and Dika is continue to watch the movie with full of concentrate without the sound of people that sit beside Tesa, that they assume as Sherly and Alaw.
                 
The movie is over and all of the lights is turn on. Dika and Tesa, hear the sound from behind their seat

Sherly    : “the movie was so great, but how poor the family that have been died in that accident. I am not really strongto hold all of my tears.”

Alaw      : “you are over acting Sherly, it’s just an ordinay sad movie. I don’t even cry sad at all”
                 
Because of hearing that sound, Dika and Tesa is really surprise cause Alaw and Sherly is sit behind their seat not beside of Tesa seat.

Dika      : “so, after all this time, you two are sit behind of our seat?”

Dika is talking with surprise.

Alaw      : “of course we are, why did you ask us about that?”

Dika and Tesa is looking at someone who sit 
beside at tesa, and they realize “someone” who sit beside Tesa is old granny that the body have full with popcorn that dika threw away.

Dika      : “I’m so sorry granny for doing that to you. How stupid I am for doing such that thing to you”

Dika is talking with embrasse feeling cause he just threw the popcorn a the wrong person.
                
The granny just keep silent, stand up from the seat and slap at Dika’s face.

Granny    : “don’t you have a brain that you have doing this to an old lady just like me?”
                 
After saying that, the granny leaving the theater with all oh her anger feeling. After all of this accident  Dika, Tesa, Alaw, and Sherly never meet with that granny again. 

Rabu, 11 April 2012

TRUST WHAT YOU LOVE

This story begins at an elementary school named "Ganesha Gita" This school is situated right in Adelaide Australia which is a city with bigger bird population than its human population. There was a boy named Jeff, a 7-year-old boy from an ordinary family. Now, he school in second grade elementary school, Jeff is smart enough in his school with all his imagination and his faith with fairy tales and many more.

Jeff faith is caused by his childhood that filled with stories of the tales that told by his father and mother. Jeff is really trust with all of the story that told by his mother and father. Every Christmas her parents always said "if you're a good boy, then Santa will meet with you and giving you rewards. Jeff believe the word that the parents told to him, because of this james became a smart kid and talented enough at school.

Jeff lived as a child just like its common, life-filled with laugh, fun and play all day. Problems arise when he graduated elementary school and continued his school to junior high school level. At this school, his life changed drastically. His life turned into a boring life.

The problem comes when Jeff met with a new friend at his new school, Jeff was asked to make introductions in front of all his friends. In his introduction, Jeff told that he believes in all the fairy tale with all the figures including it. All of the people in the class laughed.”You're not a child anymore!!” shouted a boy from inside the class. Because of this event, Jeff changing, he became a child who is not as exciting as before and the worst is that he becomes not believe with all the fairy tale "that was once told by his father and mother when she was little.

Jeff became a very sensitive child, cause of that Jeff score on all subjects dropped dramatically and it made her parents worried about hum, not only his parents but everyone around him to be concerned with the changes. Christmas arrived with all its joy, but not with Jeff, he's just quiet in his room without wanting to get out a bit. "What you did not join the others?" Said Jeff's mother outside the room. "NO! I hate Christmas "Jeff shouted from inside. His mother was very surprised by what Jeff just said by. Though Christmas is a highly anticipated moment by Jeff when he was little.

Jeff was crying in hir room because she was so upset, he wished he could not believe with all the fairy tale that was once told by his parents. Because he was so upset and sad, Jeff left the room, took his jacket and out of the house with all the feeling that is felt at the time. Jeff went to a high rise building and he going to the top floor, where he expressed his frustration with all the screaming at the top and also kicked an old sofa until it destroyed.“What is wrong with you”. The sound of someone from behind the door,  it is an old man with white long beard. Jeff told all his problems to this old man cause he don’t know how can he told all of this problem.


old man: why do not you try to trust them again?
Jeff: I do not believe what I can not see
Old man: if it is your problem, now just close your eyes

Jeff did what  the old man said to him, "now open your eyes" said the old man to Jeff. Jeff was shocked by what he sees now. The appearance of the old man that only using an ugly jackets are now using the red shirt complete with the hat of santa claus. The old man turned out to be Santa Claus. Jeff was shocked with what he see,” now you see me, do you believe in the existence of me now? "Jeff speechless and he just can only nodded as the marks of YES word.

The old man then said "never lost faith in what one you love, I'll always be there if you still believe in me". I hope you believe me as I trust to you. Jeff was not able to say any word, he just cried and cried "how could I have so stupid, I should not lose my belief in all that I loved" Jeff said in his heart. When she opened her eyes to thank and hug the old man. The old man was gone from his face. Then Jeff heard the distinctive sound of Santa Claus who said "merry christmas young man" Jeff just saw a vehicle passing in the sky with fast, and says "thank you and merry Christmas".

Selasa, 24 Januari 2012

SPOOF

SPOOF
Created By :
-Irvan Rizqullah Fikardi
-Andika Eka Putra
-Sherly Pratiwi Putri

I. Triathalon

One day, there was a Worldwide Triathalon competition being held in the depths of the jungle, in this competition the competitors must do several extreme challenges that pushes their physical to the limit.
In the morning, the competitors from around the world already gathered in the jungle and prepared for the competition tommorow morning. There are 2 competitors named A and B who is also participating at this competition.
The next morning, the judges announce what are they going to go through in this competition. First, the competitors must climb a 220 meters cliff, and then they need to swim 130 meters wide river in order to go to the next challange, and then competitors must kill a grizzly bear, then ravish a beautiful woman and run 20 km to the finish line.
The race begins, A climbed the cliff faster than anyone, he crossed the river like hell, then he killed the bear bare-handed and ravish the beautiful woman, and he sprint 20km to the finish line quickly and finish in 1st place.
11 hours later since A has finished, all of the competitors also already finish except B, the only one competitor who hasn’t finished yet. 
Peoples are starting to worried about B, and suddenly B showed up with his clothes has been torn up, he also got scar all over his body.
One of the judge ask him “what happened to you?“ B answered “the climbing went fine, I crossed the river, I killed the woman, but it went wrong when I ravish the bear…”.

Text Analytical
 
Orientation : One day, there was a Worldwide Triathalon competition being held in the depths of the jungle, in this competition the competitors must do several extreme challenges that pushes their physical to the limit.
Event 1          : In the morning, the competitors from around the world already gathered in the jungle and prepared for the competition tommorow morning. There are 2 competitors named A and B who is also participating at this competition.
Event 2          : The next morning, the judges announce what are they going to go through in this competition…
Event 3          : The race begins, A finished faster than anyone...
Event 4          : 11 hours later since A has finished, all of the competitors also already finish and they starting to worrying B 
Twist              : B showed up but he’s in bad shape...

 II. Rabbit Hunt

  
     One day, Rian, Doni, and Algi are arguing about who is the best at hunting. Rian said he’s the best because he was in the school’s scout, Doni said that he is the best because he has a good relationship with any animal in nature, and there’s Algi who said that he is the best of all of them because of he has a big body and he said he was also a descendant from early human evolution species which is meganthropus paleojavanicus.
     They keep arguing each other, then Iqbal showed up and giving them solution to decide which one of them is the best by giving them a challenge who can hunt a rabbit that was released by him, they’re all agreed with the challenge that was given by Iqbal. Iqbal said that the challenge will begin in the next day, they are told by him to met in the front of the forest the next day.
      The next morning, they gathered near the forest, then Iqbal randomly decide whose going to hunt the rabbit first, it turns out to be Doni. Doni  will be the first one to hunt the rabbit first, he place his animal informants throughout the forest. They question all plant and mineral witnesses. After three months of extensive investigations Doni’s informants conclude that the rabbit do not exist, Doni failed to hunt the rabbit.
Next, it’s Rian’s turn to hunt for the rabbit. Rian tracks the rabbit using his skills as an top scout member. After two weeks tracking with no leads Rian got frustated and he’s got mad that he burn the forest, killing everything in it, including the rabbit, and make no apologies. 
Rian got disqualified due to his dangerous and maniac behaviour which make algi as the last man standing. He entered the forest and he come out two hours later with dragging a badly beaten bear. The bear is yelling: "Okay!  Okay! I'm a rabbit!  I'm a rabbit!”  

Text Analytical

Orientation : One day, Rian, Doni, and Algi are arguing about who is the best at hunting…
Event 1          : Iqbal showed up and give them solution…
Event 2          : The next day, they gathered near the forest…
Event 3          : Rian’s turn to hunt for the rabbit…
Twist             : Algi came out with a beaten bear who admit that he is the rabbit

BONUS STORY

By : Irvan Rizqullah Fikardi 
       Algifakhri Bagus Maulana
       Tegar Ardhi Wardhana
       Andika Eka Putra

Warning : Before there's any misunderstood in this dialog there's none of them are real (excluding the characters) and some comedy was added to make it more interesting (i think)

 
     One day, Tegar and Algi is gathering in the school, they’re planning to go camping outside the pontianak.

Tegar : Algi where do you think is the most suitable place for us ?
Algi  : what do you think  about Pinyuh river tegar ?
Tegar : I think that’s a good place, but we need more people to come with us.

(irvan & dika come)

Irvan : yo tegar algi whats up man !!
Dika : yeah.. what are you doing here ?
Tegar : we’re planning to go camping in Pinyuh river, did you guys wanna come with us ?
Dika : I would love to ! how about you bro ?
Irvan : I don’t know….. maybe it’s a bit dangerous out there..
Algi : Don’t worry as long as Algi here nothing will happened ha ha ha..
Tegar : I think 4 people is enough, we’ll going next Saturday. How about that ?
Irvan : alright.. sweet next week, what should I bring ?
Tegar : bring anything usefull
Irvan : ok…

     After that, the next week Irvan, Algi, Tegar, and Dika go to Pinyuh River for camping, they set a camp in the middle of the forest but it’s not too far from the civilization.

Tegar : Dika ! can you make the bonfire ?
DIka : yes I can ! (making a bonfire)
Tegar : Irvan you prepare the food
Irvan : ok… by the way where’s algi ?
Dika : I don’t know, he said that he wants to walking in the forest.
Irvan : is that dangerous, he can be eaten by wild animal out there
Tegar : Don’t worry about him, if he get eaten then we’ll have more food to eat.
Irvan : that’s right…

     Meanwhile in the forest

Algi : (walking and look around)
Algi : oh no… I’m lost Tegaaar ! Dikaaaa !
In this scenario algi is being stalked by a pack of starving Wolves
Algi : Tegaaaar !!! Irvaaan !!! where are you guys

     Algi keeps calling for his friends. Meanwhile, the wolves are starving to eat Algi’s big, high protein, high calories, body that makes the predators in the forest drooling, and then Algi heard something sneaking out in the bushes and when Algi looked at it he was being ambushed by 12 wolves, Algi can’t do anything but scream and scream.

*algi screaming for help... and pain

ALGI : HEEELP !!!! THEY BIT MEEE !!! IT HURRTS AUUUCH !!! AUUUCH !!! MOOOOO
Tegar, Irvan, Dika : wwwow.. what is that noise ?
Tegar : let’s go to see it !
Irvan : noooo… what if we are being eaten by them also
Dika : if we’re not alone they wouldn’t attack us
Tegar : that’s right we need to go there together.
Irvan : alright…
When irvan, dika, and tegar arrived there they just found Algi’s remains
Irvan : is that Algi ?
Dika : it seems no… look at it it’s a cow it’s not Algi
Tegar : Thank goodness it’s a cow… I almost believe it that it is Algi. It really looks like him..
Irvan : yes… it looks like a cow… but what’s cow doing here ?

(silence)……………………………………………………………………..

Dika : Innalillahi Astagfirullah al adzim… that’s not cow that’s Algi…
Tegar : Oh my god… that’s why it looks like him..
Irvan : What do we do now ?

(silence again)…………………………………………………………….

*Dika, Irvan, Tegar run away